Toilet
A Poem by Hugo Williams
Seems the theme for edonn.com this week appears to be poetry, so here’s another:
I wonder will I speak to the girl
sitting opposite me on this train.
I wonder will my mouth open and say,
‘Are you going all the way
to Newcastle?’ or ‘Can I get you a coffee?’
Or will it simply go ‘aaaaah’
as if it had a mind of its own?Half closing eggshell blue eyes,
she runs her hand through her hair
so that it clings to the carriage cloth,
then slowly frees itself.
She finds a brush and her long fair hair
flies back and forth like an African fly-whisk,
making me feel dizzy.Suddenly, without warning,
she packs it all away in a rubber band
because I have forgotten to look out
the window for a moment.
A coffee is granted permission
to pass between her lips
and does so eagerly, without fuss.A tunnel finds us looking out the window
into one another’s eyes. She leaves her seat,
but I know that she likes me
because the light saying ‘TOILET’
has come on, a sign that she is lifting
her skirt, taking down her pants
and peeing all over my face.
crap
nay. beautiful.
loving this poem – only just read it for the first time yesterday and think its wonderful. very real, very simple, very awkward and obsessive and just the sort of masculine love/romanctic poem that might be influenced from catcher in the rye. i think its very romantic.
was the person that said crap intending to have a pun? i thaught it was hilarious, loving the twist at the end!